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    Author: naomi198222
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    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Night falls and despair dawns. She breaths a sigh of relief, for the pain will finally be gone. Life sometimes seemed to be to much. She thinks to herself, That she has finally had enough. "There is no other way", she says aloud. As if there were someone there that could stop her now. She sees her reflection in the mirror. She tries hard not to blink, As she watches, a tear falls in to the bathroom sink. They begin to flow like a waterfall. She tries but can't controll it, For she knew her life would soon be over. She closes her eyes and darkness commences, And she feels ok with whats about to take place here. She makes a fist and puts the razor to her wrist.When she finally gets the nerve, She makes the slit.Deathknocks at her bathroom door, As she lie cold and on the floor. The reaper is here to take her condenmed soul. And now finally she knows she'll never be alone.




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      i don't know what to think of this. I used to cut, and write poems about death and depression, so in a way this poem has my interest. But it also reminds me of things i am trying to forget.
    All in all it is a good piece because it expresses you.
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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