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Let me cut you..

Author: Black-Death
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Let me cut you..

As i slowly cut you open.
leting the blood drip out over your pail body.
Cutting the knife deeper into your skin.
Watching your vains Cry in pain.
Letting all my pain die swiftly.
As i cut deeper i can hear you cry.
I look into your eyes filled with blood and tears.
All i can see in your eyes is Pain.
For me.
As i cut deeper....
i finaly relize...
that im looking into a mirror...

Submitted on 2007-03-01 14:54:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Love it. it's euphoric to me. I think you got something going on.
| Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
  A little worrying but i admit i liked this. please dont cut yourself, if you wrote about your personal activities! 'pale' body really gives us a clear idea about who it is. i like how you express the real pain..makes me feel sore!
| Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by michaela | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this alot. It reminds me of alot of the thing I write. I love the way you express the feeling of actually being cut. Great job!

| Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by Randa04 | [ Reply to This ]

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