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    dots Submission Name: For an angel. For Hunter. dots

    Author: atonement
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    dotsFor an angel. For Hunter. dots

    Ever have one of those times,
    when you just had to write?
    The world just stopped spinning,
    and nothing seems right.

    You sit there,
    and think this is just some joke,
    some cruel and unfunny joke,
    and there was no joker to tell,
    just this unforgiving reality.

    This doesn't make sense,
    nothing does at the moment,
    when life is given so quickly,
    and taken away in the same

    I can't wrap my head,
    around this affliction
    called death,
    the overrated prophecy,
    that happened all to soon.

    When we don't get to tell the stories,
    and remember in past tense,
    what is all left is this
    emotional mess.

    What we think know,
    is still unknown,
    contary to all beliefs,
    I'm still not sure what
    happens after death.

    Submitted on 2007-03-01 20:37:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really can appreciate this write, its written in great depth; you seem to have a great reach into yourself,
    I guess that can only get deeper and more evolved,
    I used to almost word for word relay the same philosophy of chance.

    Cool write, I really enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]

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