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    dots Submission Name: Scarlet Hopedots
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    Author: Smelnick
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/1/8
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       this was actually written based on this short story i had to read in grade 12 lit class


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    dotsScarlet Hopedots
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    first there was no hope
    dismissal of a life
    expressions were so faint
    appendages unmoving

    but the grin of life
    soon graced this faulty essence
    signs of imperfections
    lost but not forgotten

    Chorus
    --------------------------
    vibrant and lost beast of hidden hope
    sign of the future lusting for the past
    magnificent beauty forever to remain
    until the bells ring out the end of scarlet hope
    ----------------------------

    aggravating kin
    of minisculeproportions
    conforming to the wishes
    of one linked by blood

    a hope for furthur power
    the quest to make amends
    a joyous time of passing
    the voyage that be made

    chorus

    storm of great emotion
    hiding bursts of pain
    evil deed of prides desire
    hanting futures unknown

    ignorance is arrogance
    evil deed of innocence
    mistakes past wisdom attained
    destiny for one unmarred




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