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    dots Submission Name: The Archerdots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 895/379/103
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Archerdots
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    Love is on your mind,
    And surely he is to blame.
    He 'pulls' the string,
    And lets it fly.

    The arrow hits dead center.
    Your heart nearly explodes.
    You can not explain this
    Feeling inside.

    His aim was dead on.
    His eye was on you.
    Now you will pay.
    The reason love is blind.

    Your mind races to every
    Corner.
    Your eyes see every option.
    Now you strike.

    He never stood a chance.
    He never knew what hit him.
    For you see, the lover got
    The archer , before he got away




    Submitted on 2007-03-02 01:43:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is sort of a sad yet funny poem, and let me explain why. It is sad because the person in the poem was being taken advantage of. As well as being made to suffer, purposly, that is never cool. The love that the person had for the other was very strong. But it is also funny because the bad person in this poem got what they deserved before they could complete the horrible things they were gonna do. So in part they got what they deserved even before they had a chance to finish. Excellent. I like the love revenge trip. You have done this very well.

    Another way to read this poem is, the person was inlove with someone who had no idea. and every day they saw the person it would hurt them so much. just as the person was about to get away, they snaged them.
    Sorry if I am completly off in my interpretaion of your poetry.
    good job

    --Death--
    | Posted on 2007-03-11 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]
      hey this is a really good poem. i digg iyt. i like the end its awsome.


    yeahhh.

    laterr dude.
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]



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