Description: another rape poem i know the ryming sceam does not go together but it was throwen together in like 5 mins cuz it came to me during class.
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Depression a virus creeping into tattered corrupted minds,
Following along the broken vessels leaving behind its crying disease
My tears collide with my bloody wrists
Turning my reel of bad memories until there permanently attached to my eyes
As he spins his tightly woven web of lies.
The world runs by and time stops completely
As I lie on the water stained floor to except my unfortunate fate
The sounds of the ambulance draw near as the frantic screams realize that
The needles are too late.
I have lived each day as a suicidal turn of events
As your sins become my obsessive homicidal defense
But you wanted me to live in your sexual hell
And as I spiraled further my lips were sewn shut so I couldn’t tell
You told me that you were a predator and I was your pray
And as you speak of your deceit
It is in your bed of lies I lay
Victimized by your wondering hands
Cowering scared under your secretive commands.
Now I hide what you did to me underneath my torn heart
As my life drains from my wounds and my blood and I depart.
i like this poem...although at the end i could've sworn it was goin to say As my life drains from my wounds and the blood from my heart. i don't know why, i'm just weird that way. another one in my favs. though.
ok... so I am Profoundly SPEECHLESS at how well that was written... I would not change one single word In the total of 202...
You have a wonderful way with words...
I have no criticisms here... for you need none... WOW!!!
That is definately one of my favourites... for I can sadly relate to such an awesome piece... thankyou for giving us the chance to read it!
.............. Speechless .......... it is good , really good , I can't even think of one word to compete against your letters , hope you write more........Wow!!!........
Submission Name: webs
