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    dots Submission Name: Out of sight.. .Out of mind...dots
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    Author: fallen_angel384
    ASL Info:    17/Female/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 59/87/22
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 104
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    dotsOut of sight.. .Out of mind...dots
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    I saw an old friend today...
    i thought i'd lost him...
    but today he turned up
    he was all shiney and silver...
    i stood there looking at him for what seemed like ages but was probably only a maximum of 10 minutes
    i was going to discard him but i couldnt do it...
    we had so much history together
    he'd helped me through the bad times
    helped me unleash my anger
    there was a little stain on the left corner..
    must have forgotten to clean him...
    i didnt use him.. but then again i kept him...
    mixed feelings at the moment
    because when i couldnt find him i was more or less ok.. (out of sight out of mind)
    but now hes back i think i'm going back to my old ways..
    having those thoughts i used to have...
    i think its because i know hes there..
    i know i have him back..




    Submitted on 2007-03-02 09:39:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm. This almost seems as if it's a riddle... was it a knife that you were talking about? I probably guessed wrong... you also might want to go back and correct some grammatical errors, and maybe not use so many ellipses (those are the "..." things) overall, great job!

    Keep writing and keep up the great work!

    *~ Mist ~*
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]



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