A Beautiful Wreck... by SorrelsReality

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Author:	SorrelsReality
ASL Info:	25/ Female/ See Quote.
Elite Ratio:	6.52 - 175/113/20
Words:	48

Class/Type:	Poetry/
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A very close, fellow christian is having a hard time with love....he's in so much pain right now...he's hurting, and as he hurts...it hurts me. I feel his pain, and I just want to cry for him. I know these emotions he's trying to pull himself out of.... I've always had a hard time watching my friends hurt this way. I just want him to know he's loved. And that I know he's strong enough to get through this, and anything Satan puts in his way.

A Beautiful Wreck... dots

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It can raise you to the peak of a mountain...

Or drown you in the depths of the sea...

Have you floating through the heavens...

Or scorched in earths core.

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Can we not find a place in between?

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Excellent poem on love, Sorrel! I haven't been by your site for awhile, so just thought I'd drop in.
| Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
It can make you filled with confidence...

Or naked for all to see...

It can take you to where you've always dreamed...

Or make you wake up cold from the nightmare...

It can make your bones strong and unbreakable...

Or it can make your body as weak as a fall leaf

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It can have you dancing on a bridge under the stars, twirling around in the cold, but too close to one another to let go...

It can have you dressing up in goofy clothes and running all over a park taking pictures, and laughing at eachother all afternoon...

It can have you restless with worry, as the one your heart longs for is serving the Lord on the otherside of the world...

Or it can be an unexplaine end to the most beautiful thing God had ever placed into your life.

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It takes two people to mkae it work...

And too often only one is willing to take that leap of faith...

I'm tired of leaping...

I'm tired.

I'm lonely.

I'm weak.

I'm terrified.

I'm confused.

I'm hurt.

I'm depressed.

I'm anxious.

I'm lost.

I'm desperate.

I'm broken.

I'm empty-handed.

I'm blind.

I'm voiceless.

I'm empty.

I'm pleading.

I'm wanting.

I'm trapped.

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She told me to always remember three things...

1) "It's okay to smile.

2) "Everything is fine."

3) "She's committed to this."

None of those are true anymore... none of them.

| Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by UnspokenDreamer | [ Reply to This ]

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