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    dots Submission Name: Remnants dots
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    Author: The_Forsaken1
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 18/25/11
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    Desolation my last salvation
    Delving deeper to darkness sleeping
    Take up your cross and stop the bleeding
    In my nightmares are mothers weeping
    My broken secret no longer keeping
    Solitude forever seeking
    While my holocaust is creeping
    On memories and there demons

    The nail awaits the sleeping fiend
    That retires to the tomb to dream
    Take a walk down the aisle at the end of the mile
    Give your life to my charms in the admirals arms
    My hollowed hallow away from harm
    Or lest the lies be woven like yarn
    As Dying days dawn darker ends
    This final plea to you I send




    Submitted on 2007-03-02 19:22:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is cool as! I admire your flow, plus it's a beautiful truth, I felt inside your mind state as I read through,
    It's also well structured at the end, I hate it when good writes just fall away without closure,

    Nice style

    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-03-02 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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