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la lip-gloss

Author: darkwiccan14
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lip gloss, wut will i write next? (dun dun duntttt jk)

la lip-gloss

My lip-gloss,
Is my lip's boss,
It goes on,
and never comes off.

IT only smells,
When it's on this gurl named,
Bell, who needs to go to,

Lip-gloss is for people like me,
ok I lied,
It does come off,
especially when i have a glass of Tea,
So throw your lip fears aside,
And throw some lip-gloss on!

Submitted on 2007-03-02 19:51:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hahahaha..................hahahahahaha..........haahaa... ohh it hurts.... great poem
| Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by DrkRomeo_sGirl | [ Reply to This ]
  nice read my poems
| Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]
  heeehee this is cute. very cute.
write on,
| Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by EmeRalDEyeZ5491 | [ Reply to This ]
  haha. well, i dont really know what to say, except that its a very entertaining piece.
| Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by AdrienneCale | [ Reply to This ]

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