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Author:	Torie
Elite Ratio:	2.69 - 176/194/40
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Escape

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Being myself

Is a secret.

So I escape.

From what?

From the masher

Who mashes me to pulp.

But I find myself in secret corners

For whole days at a time

And at night I escape into sleep.

Victor.

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