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    dots Submission Name: Punishment = Deathdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 803
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 863



    Description:
       This Is About My Ex Bf Who Used To Beat Up On Me Untill The Day He Killed My Unborn Child And I Had The Guts To Leave Him And To This Day He Stalks Me Everyonce In A While Making Contact...


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    the day you raised you fist at me
    was the day i wanted you dead
    i live each and every single day
    with only one regret
    i regret falling in love with you
    your really fucked me up
    remember that day you killed my child
    i will never forget
    the hatred i saw in your eyes will
    be your only regret
    you should wish you never did that
    pay back is a bitch
    cause oneday i will find you
    and ill kill you understand!!
    you everthing i despise
    i dont know how you call yourself a man
    to ever beat up on a girl
    fuck i wish you would drown
    the day i first met you
    i knew was to good to be true
    your a fake a liar an asshole
    you deserve all that you get
    for fucking me over and leaving me there
    your punishment is death




    Submitted on 2007-03-03 03:06:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A guy like that doesn't deserve to live, how anyone could be cold and bitter enough to do something like that....I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. And I'm a guy as well, but I wouldn't even try defending someone like that.
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
      call me up anytime ill help out he doesnt deserve to live hurting you that much
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG i know what your going through i'll lend you the gun/knife and help you bury the wanker!!! excellent write

    you a fake a liar an [censored]
    you deserve all that you get
    for [censored] me over and leaving me there
    your punishment is death

    that was my favourite stanza i espieially liked the last two lines keep up the good work loved it!
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by phsycoticangel | [ Reply to This ]
      yo ill help u kill him. gladly.

    peace

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this really touched me. Everything will get better eventually tho love! just keep a very positive mind! ok!? lol cya around!
    ~*alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]


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