Kiss and Tell by SilverScent

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Submission Name: Kiss and Tell dots

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Author:	SilverScent
ASL Info:	19/Female/England
Elite Ratio:	3.74 - 94/106/71
Words:	48

Class/Type:	Poetry/
Total Views:	67
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	322

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Kiss and Tell dots

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Willow and wind kiss,
and tell the lake
of spring's arrival.

As goose bumps on a
creaky bench,
beckon the petting
of auric frolics.
The tresses sway,
and the quenching pool
echoes the tunics

- twittering and scented.

Submitted on 2007-03-03 06:51:27 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
This was excellent! I especially loved the part that said:
"As goose bumps of a
creaky bench,
beckon the petting
of auric frolics."

Auric... I would have never been able to come up with a word that fit so well! Great job! There was only one editing error, which is the "springs arrival" shouldn't it be "spring's arrival". Anyways this was a very good write!

Keep writing and keep up the great work!

*~ Mist ~*

| Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]

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