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~*perky*~


Author: darkwiccan14
Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125 /125 /88
Words: 13
Class/Type: Haiku /Comedy
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*Sigh* ppl keep telling me i'm PERKY! so hiya! PERKY HAIKU!! lol!


~*perky*~



I am so perky,
Oh so perky it scares me,
This amuses me.




Submitted on 2007-03-03 13:33:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i had to really buckle down and count the syllables. For a second, i didn't it was 5-7-5, but it really is. That's cool
| Posted on 2007-03-15 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
  this is awsome this sounds like something I would write!!!! Read my poems!
| Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]


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