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Ode to my Brothers

Author: darkwiccan14
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ha, u queers! Mi hermanos es muy raro...ha ha! lol!

Ode to my Brothers

Dear dear brothers,
May I tell you be right back,
For a short (long) while?
I tell you be right back,
When i'm actually saying,
See you later,
And you dont know this but,
It actually means dont talk to me,
But still you not know,
How I love you so,
So love,
Be a dear,
And...oh i dunno...
Quit being a queer!!!???
(and this is why i tell you be right backkk...)

Submitted on 2007-03-03 13:37:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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