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    Author: redthewitch
    ASL Info:    36/f/tiny rural village
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 267/175/26
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 555
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       The end of my day. Short, as my poems usually are.


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    the lights are out, and it is late
    we crawl into bed and adjust the covers
    encircled in your arms
    curved into you
    i have no need for dreams




    Submitted on 2007-03-03 16:55:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is simple and sweet. I like the detail of "adjust the covers" because it's something that we do, yes, but something that could easily be left out of the details should we relay them to someone (or write a poem) and so that makes it precious among the many precious things.

    -Emeya.
    | Posted on 2012-04-15 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi there Mrs soul silencer,
    I got love for your type; just every time I try to hold a conversation with those in shoes just like yours,
    in turns to heated debate about the source of each of our ideologies, I always try to steer from anger but yet mostly thats what I find,
    I'm totally happy for you being contempt in your sphere,
    if you can smile back to a spirit who smiles at you,
    then never will there be a need for any form of despair.
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      aw its so cute.... they r your dream arent they? its so short yet so full lol idk, did that make sense?
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by rapius | [ Reply to This ]


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