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A Late Night Conversation A late night conversation You two talk about anything Even a little bit of flirtation You sit up nearly the whole night And you go to bed At exactly the same time And I’m left downstairs Sobbing my eyes out But I don’t mind Because as long as your happy I’ll keep my chin up On the toilet seat A late night conversation A little bit of agitation You don’t talk about anything anymore You don’t sit up at all now And you don’t even go to bed At the same time And you have the cheek To come crawling back to me But I’m still sobbing my eyes out But they’re tears of happiness Because I’m not a blubbering wreck anymore And keep your chin Before I knock your block off. |
i like the way you convey emotion and how you change from one meaning to the next in a new stanza. but the last two lines in each stanza i dont get. other than that though good write! ali | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ] | I like punching people | | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ] | |