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Conflict Within

Author: Suffer Well
ASL Info:    36/F/East Coast
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Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Meh, a question

Conflict Within

What drives the mind and it's emotion?
Thoughts? Desires? Love? Devotion?

Or is it just a simple beast
That holds us down and wants to feast?

Making mockery of our will
Causing chaos for the thrill.

Heart's desire not satisfied
Longing for the other side.

The side of dark and shameful things
Opposed to joy and wedding rings

Morals, choices lessons learned
Wisdom earned, pain that burns.

God's directions bold and clear
His contradiction oh so queer

How can the mind control desire
When the human heart is not so wired?

Who is the master of a human soul?
The mind that minds?
Or heart that controls?

Submitted on 2007-03-03 17:47:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this write.
My answer to the question would be definitely not the mind,
the mind will silence the heart though it maybe unintentional,
but remember the heart to can produce poor fruit,
but I guess we all realize there's devils among us,
but the fact you can ask questions like that suggests to me your heart doesn't wish to walk with them.
| Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]

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