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    dots Submission Name: i wonderdots
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    Author: BloodyMary87
    ASL Info:    19/f/Al
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 24/22/11
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 97
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1005



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       i just now did this one. i was once engaged,but not any more. yes, i loved him very much...still do. he was the best thing that happened to me,and now i feel that he was the worst. i hurt so bad and i never thought this could happen to me. but it did and now i try to take it day by day. i think of him every day. and i wonder if he still dose the same.


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    dotsi wonderdots
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    I wonder.

    I wonder if you drive by my window on your nights out and think of me.
    I wonder when you see something of mine you think of me.
    I wonder if you are alone you think of me.
    I wonder if you are in someone’s bed you think of me.
    I wonder when you drive by our old high school you think of me.
    I wonder if you hold a rose you think of me.
    I wonder if you see a couple holding hand you think of me.

    I wonder if you happen to see me you miss me.
    I wonder if you got to our spot on that mountain you miss me.
    I wonder if you see hello kitty you miss me.
    I wonder if you see that black heart pillow you miss me.
    I wonder if you smell my favorite perfume you miss me.
    I wonder if you walk in to that Italian restraint you took me to for prom you miss me.
    I wonder if you look at that diamond ring you miss me.

    I wonder if I died tomorrow would you weep for me?





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    ||| Comments |||
      aight? wtf? That is pretty gay. mr. mystery must be gangsta like Andrew. lol. Anyways, this poem was depressing like all the ones about Andrew. But hopefully mr. mystery was right and you will meet someone who will make you forget about him.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey please bun think of ur ex-bf like that, there are lots of better guys out there.

    "Someday someone's gonna love you
    the way you wanted him to need you
    Someday someone's gonna take his place
    One day you'll forget about him
    He'll see, you won't even miss him
    Someday, someday,"

    so cheer up, nobody's gonna die of a broken heart aight?
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by mr.mystery | [ Reply to This ]



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