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Author: Eagle
ASL Info:    20, M, Australia
Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 22 /48 /18
Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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"I HATE you.
I wish you would just die.
I wish you would go away and never, NEVER return.
I wish you hadn't been born.
I wish you were someone else.
I wish you had nothing in your life, just like you deserve." he screamed as he looked in the mirror...

Submitted on 2007-03-04 06:38:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Haven't we all had these moments? Mine is usually followed by grabbing a pair of scissors and destroying my hair. But that's just me. I can truly appreciate this piece, and I imagine everyone else can too. Who hasn't looked in the mirror and hated the person that they saw?

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| Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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