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    dots Submission Name: Beat Eater 1dots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 650
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 935



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    dotsBeat Eater 1dots
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    We from M.I.N.N.E.S.O.T.A
    U know we bout 2 run dis thang from New York City to West L.A.
    We like dat loch ness monster in dis game
    We do anything we please
    In da hood, U dont see
    But yall hear story bout my boy Davie
    Never on his knees when da cops say freeze

    We stay low key
    Till we have 2 murk a nigga
    4 fucking wit da family
    U yall crabs put ur lyrics to seize

    We be posted up on dat block
    Running at cha wit da klock
    Pop, Pop, Pop, Pop.
    Get ur block knocked off

    Now u messin wit true Minnesotans
    U dont want beef wit us
    U know u going to get shot, straight up on da block,
    Right on da spot, 6ft deep n rot
    Cause u know dis this shit hot.
    Fuck u yall slops

    So let dem haters hate
    But we going to have to regulate
    Minnesota #1 State




    Submitted on 2007-03-04 13:39:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      hahaha

    this makes me laugh. Im sorry, i have never been to minnesota, but it seems like a nonsense rap about how you all are tough, and "dont mess with the minnesotans"

    im sorry, but minnesota is too long of a word for this rap. I can see no flow at all.
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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