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    dots Submission Name: Feeling*so*damn*bluedots
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    Author: darkwiccan14
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125/125/88
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
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       ha ha....2 seconds of ur time...wasted...ha ha


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    dotsFeeling*so*damn*bluedots
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    Feeling so damn blue,
    I dunno what to do,
    But to tie my shoe.

    (ha ha :P and u thought this haiku would be interesting :P wasted 2 seconds of ur time looking !!! lmao)




    Submitted on 2007-03-04 17:52:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that is somthing i would wite... thats a good thing...i think
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]
      Funny.
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]


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