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    dots Submission Name: Eagle's Wingsdots
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    Author: djtswing
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    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Sometimes I feel so down and weak. I can't seem to find myself in anything, I can't find any fulfillment. I wish I was everyone else, I thought there life seemed so easy. So I would read Isaiah 40:31 and pray. Each and every day, I'd pray and believe that God would raise me from my pit of sorrow and hold my hand as I lived another day in His will.


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    I didn’t grow up as someone great,
    Always called odd, the one they’d hate.
    I could never deny
    Their were times I’d cry.
    Sometimes I’d lose my cool,
    Act out of line at school.
    I wasn’t a popular sports superstar,
    I was the one who couldn’t meet the bar.
    I wasn’t a jock or a geek,
    I was just plain out weak.
    I’d hit the wall, have a breakdown,
    I wanted to be them, or a kid with a crown.
    My view changed one day,
    When I went out alone to play.
    An eagle soared overhead
    I wished I lived the life it lead.
    If only I could fly,
    Soar off into the sky.
    I went into the Bible to read,
    Hoping to find whatever I’d need.
    Isaiah forty: thirty-one was what I saw,
    I read it as I sat there in awe.
    “They will mount up on wings like eagles”
    Is this a mere coincidence?
    I reached out for God’s hand,
    And I found the strength to stand.




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      thats a great piece. i think people can really relate to it. the only thing i can think of is that some parts rhyme, others dont. you might want to think about changing it, but even if you dont it will still be a good piece. very good job. ;D <3
    Jessica
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]



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