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    dots Submission Name: Think of medots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 655



    Description:
       This poem is about alot of people that have hurt me...


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    dotsThink of medots
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    Think of me
    The next time you get high
    Think of me
    When you don't know why
    Think of me
    When your up all night
    Think of me
    When you can't make it right
    Think of me
    When your lying next to her
    Think of me
    The next time you get hurt
    Think of me
    When she swears she loves you
    Think of me
    When you don't know what to do
    Think of me
    When your out alone
    Think of me
    When you have no love of your own
    Think of me
    And all the pain I went through
    Think of me
    When you go through it too....




    Submitted on 2007-03-04 22:06:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this because I'm feeling this right now too... And it really does hurt... Good write, keep it up
    love ya
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]


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