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    dots Submission Name: Mutual Lossdots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 66
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    Tucking my little angel into bed
    Tonight`s ordeal best left unsaid
    Tomorrow I tell my angel that her halo has quietly gone
    Mommy won't be coming back, succumbing to the coma by dawn

    How do you tell your daughter that?
    I need all the help I can get, stuck in an emotional trap
    Cindy plays with her doll, my agony temporarily diffused
    I suppose I don`t completely lose

    I wish not to alter my child's life
    Overwhelmed in her resemblance to my wife
    "Baby doll, mommy departed for a better place"
    I hold her close as the tears stream down her face

    A forgotten moment that cannot escape my mind
    Time and time again I`m trying and I`ve tried
    Long ago I recognized she was my halo too
    The tears tumble down me also...how I do miss you

    She adds a rare smile to my aging face
    Imagine a flower without water and its matching vase
    Oh God, won't she be coming back?
    I scream and scream but my heart will only crack




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