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    dots Submission Name: Frameddots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 53
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    Peeping through the window of the antique store
    A confident painting lured me in

    The vivid colors of a dignified seashore
    sparkling wonder, livening hues coupled with colorful darks
    seagulls darting out of the pale blue sky
    time-consuming strands of marshland, all colors
    your quintessential lighthouse, clarifying the background
    a cool mist hovering out over endless waves
    catapulting sensual sentiments into oncoming euphoria

    My sight catches its mortal frame
    dull, displeasing grains of wood
    tainted amongst natural markings
    misplaced in my charming fantasy
    its corners scarred and chipped
    man`s nature visibly wrought
    inner beauty possible yet not feasible
    wood inevitably rotting over time
    deserving of time

    I bought it that very day
    Marvelous painting bonded to matching frame




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