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    dots Submission Name: Like Tangled Cordsdots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 91
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 744



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    dotsLike Tangled Cordsdots
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    One momentary notion bent over another
    Manic mind twisted around perilous knot
    Mile upon alluded mile of wired confusion
    Unsuitable, Uninhabitable, Unable
    This life, lost in the midst of tangled cords

    Connections amassed, ruling affection dashed
    Great Jungle of Misleads and Mistakes
    Dipping vitals, suspended on dangling cables
    Wired confusion bound by sole outlet of sloped hope
    This life, lost among tangled cords

    Riddled with riddles, somewhere in the middle
    Strangled in binding tangle, wearily handled
    Like tangled cords he impatiently waits
    Fate to be rescued from the mismatch of life
    This life, lost between tangled cords




    Submitted on 2007-03-04 22:40:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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