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    dots Submission Name: Down the Scope, We Godots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 53
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    dotsDown the Scope, We Godots
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    The unit, unite, united
    All take up the same space
    On this declaration word plate
    On this paper in uniform ink
    Now, separate from my single sheet
    Just for a minute, take a moment
    You have gone missing
    Out of your life and into mine
    Look around kind man
    Tell me what you see

    Live in dying color
    The city of Baltimore
    Cloudy skies above, purple haze below
    Endless litter, hidden as the streetlights flicker dim
    A scurrying rat, holes in the garbage cans
    Holes in the floor of my success
    A lone child hurries up the nearby alley
    His own shadow, they barely flicker
    And I know the boy`s not going home
    But strolling to the corner
    Baltimore`s finest even gave him a name
    That sure is a dandy corner boy
    And cornered for eternity
    Don`t worry though, for he`ll make it

    Most esteemed and gentle gent, that`s enough for one night
    You have done a great service to your country
    You have pointed out the follies and the foolish
    You forgot to mention the child on the swing
    You turned your back on her
    When she could only smile innocently at you
    Then hopped into her mother`s waiting arms
    They mean no harm tonight
    And neither does this stray dog
    He has lost his way, not the only one
    I choose to feed it
    While you stand halved




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