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    dots Submission Name: Moultingdots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 76
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    dotsMoultingdots
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    I never realized my opportunities
    Such ideas never drove down here
    Instead I received the never pleasant
    Never caught a hint in my eyes
    Never caught a taste worth tasting
    Never felt satisfied and at ease
    Eased in the sense of diseased
    It must have been a lack of food
    Mal nourishment highlighted my days
    Oh, they were the shiniest ones
    Don`t get me wrong all along
    Misunderstandings you undergo
    Every day was I physically fed
    Those other senses- underdeveloped
    My entire life, merely underdeveloped
    Yet the mind felt so overdeveloped
    Did that make me middle developed?
    Middle of the road, average, the throng
    I don`t think that frame of mind exists
    Looking back, I touch disillusionment
    It pampers me, takes me in as its own
    I, unsure of what went down at the life
    Unaware of the truth I have sought
    I`ve searched for all too long
    Only positive of the wrongs
    How I was wrong, we stood all wrong
    A single heap of dismayed disease
    I`m never going back
    I don`t think that frame of mind exists




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