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    dots Submission Name: The Pyramiddots
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    Author: garbear
    ASL Info:    17/male/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 0/2/40
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 81
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 683



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    dotsThe Pyramiddots
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    Foundations touch the green ground
    Consisting of stricken material
    Your self depleted from yourself
    Seen as little beyond another shelf

    It lays sturdy as precious steel
    Layers higher lie all along
    The bottom supports a sparkling top
    Layer by layer, the unconscious flop

    Further up the pyramid plop the middle
    They too stress those abused below
    Little do they know of the royalty above
    Ready to bag their dreams with diamond gloves

    And as we come to the crescent
    The layers below are obscured
    Clouded in a forced mystery
    Barely a page in invisible history




    Submitted on 2007-03-04 22:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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