This seems almost sarcastic and mocking... is that the tone that you were trying to get across? Well, you might want to consider rewording the first stanza, it appeared a little awkward, or at least not fitting to the rest of the poem. Very nice metaphor-esqueness with the "paralyzing coldness" and the melting. Fantastic! Maybe you could find another, more strong word for melting? Overall, it was a good poem!