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    dots Submission Name: Misunderstood....dots
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    Author: fallen_angel69
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 48
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    Description:
       This poetry is how I feel.Sometimes life gets hard and I would love to just give up. But honestly given the chance to actually take my life something always holds me back. I don't know if any of you can relate to this but I hope someone can.


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    dotsMisunderstood....dots
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    Misunderstood....
    Slicing and dicing, she cuts deeper and deeper,
    seeing just one drop of blood will make her happy.
    Crying and shaking, she raises the knife,
    wishing for the courage to take her own life.
    Pushing harder on the blade, trying to die,
    she often just sits and wonders why;
    Why are people so selfish and hating,
    nobody knows the pain she suffers through.
    She just wants love, why don't they understand this?,
    nobody says I love you or asks her how she is doing.
    Wanting love more than anything in the world,
    wanting to feel pretty once in awhile.
    Crying and trying to die once again,
    all she really needs is one caring friend.
    Depressed all the time for reasons unknown to herself,
    wishing all the pain would just go disappear.
    Trying to be happy and funny is hard for her,
    even when doing things she once did enjoy.
    No courage to actually kill herself,
    just cutting makes her feel better.
    Wishing she could die, not knowing why,
    just wanting love and companionship.
    Crying and shaking, she raises the knife,
    wishing for the courage to take her own life...

    LeiLani Sutton




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 05:13:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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