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    dots Submission Name: Hypotheticallydots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Hypothetically,
    He was supposed to be there.
    Hypothetically,
    I'm not supposed to care,
    Hypothetically (then),
    When she cries,
    I shouldn't dry her eyes,
    But hypothetically (again),
    No, that wouldn't be fair,
    Hypothetically,
    Ther's a difference,
    Between wrong and right,
    Unfortunately, niether,
    Will get me out of my plight,
    Hypothetically,
    I should sit here,
    And lifelessly fade,
    But life's a dagger,
    And I don't get,
    the dull side of the blade,
    Hypothetically,
    Though I feel empty,
    I'm Suppose to stay srong,
    and it's been so long,
    Don't you know,
    Empty feels so wrong?
    He was supposed to be there,,
    Hypothetically,
    I'm not supposed to care,
    Hypothetically (then),
    I should hide,
    Everything Ifeel Inside,
    But hypothetically (again),
    No, that wouldn't be fair...




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 07:35:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. Okay, so yes, I did check it out and I like it! A lott!!!
    It really does show you what guys think, and especially what you're going through.
    That's a really good write.
    -Missy
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ]
      This is how all guys think. That they are not supposed to cry or even care. If a guy who at least shed a tear for something he would be considered gay. Right on for telling that you care no matter what someone says or thinks. Well that is what I interpert from this poem.
    :p
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by bigothgurl | [ Reply to This ]


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