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    dots Submission Name: Reflectiondots
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    Author: PrincessDoom13
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 79/80/39
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Just an inspiration from a daily look into a mirror! All comments are welcomed!


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    dotsReflectiondots
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    Who is this stranger
    That stands before me?
    This person has some nerve
    To stand there like she knows me!
    She has some nerve
    To attempt to judge me!
    “You don’t know me!
    You don’t know anything!”
    I screamed at her
    As her lips mock me.
    She doesn’t know me
    Or the hell of my family.
    She doesn’t know me
    Or my problems I have.
    I can’t stand it anymore,
    Just seeing her makes me boil.
    So I made a decision
    “I will get what I want!”
    I told the girl, very straight forward,
    “Just watch me, I will.”
    I turned on my heels,
    I sped toward the kitchen chair.
    I returned and saw her
    Wearing a smug expression
    One that said you won’t do it.
    I began to boil more.
    I slammed the chair into her face
    I watched her fall to millions of pieces
    Right before my eyes.
    I turned around, left the scene
    I never looked back again.




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 11:02:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this poem. I wrote a poem called Reflection but it wasnt like that. this poem seemed like the person in the poem was kinda in self denial and had to kill off that part of her so she could success. i like it. very inspirational.
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by Midnight_Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      So does this talking to the mirror and saying that the reflection doesn't know you, mean that you don't know yourself? If it does, I can relate. I am absolutely a mystery to myself. That might possibly be because I'm a little crazy, though. Half the time I do stuff and I don't even know why I'm doing it. It's weird. But really, sometimes I look into the mirror and I feel like screaming at the reflection because what I see is not me. It's always someone else. The image shows everything I don't want, and I'm tired of it.
    Before I read this, I just thought this was another mirror poem. I've read a lot of those. Hell, I've even written a few myself. But this one is very original, and very enjoyable.

    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]



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