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    dots Submission Name: WHO DO I ASK?dots
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    Author: mimi
    ASL Info:    30/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597/390/111
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       know of any other despcriptions for the despicables of the world?


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    dotsWHO DO I ASK?dots
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    I went to see a poet and
    he told me you would know it
    so I came to ask the question
    why is the news so depressing?
    ABC, NBC, CBS
    They are all giving me symptoms of PMS.
    Moody when I see that the
    rich are getting richer,
    and the poor are getting oil from
    Venezuela to heat their homes.
    I have crying spells
    when I see the statistics of yet another
    drug addicted, sex convicted,
    person has harmed a child.
    The breaking news is always
    about murder and mayhem,
    Homicide and suicide
    Shootings and robberies,
    rapes and violence.
    My moods are swinging as
    Dan Rather and Charles Gibson
    Play ping pong with bad news.
    Im plagued with fatigue
    When BBC, CNN
    And even the MTV news
    covers stories about a war thatíll never end
    about a world thatíll never transcend beyond fighting
    for a strip of land that
    Jesus and Mohmnned taught
    To be peaceful on.
    If the poet is confounded,
    and you look befuddled and astounded,
    who would have the answer
    to save me from
    a midol overdose?




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 12:12:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i have a lot of names for them but i just keep them to myself. you, however, did a very good job of saying it best! kinda humorous and very diplomatic might i add...i really liked it!!!!

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    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]


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