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    dots Submission Name: Her Hammockdots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 49/52/37
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsHer Hammockdots
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    With no occasion to rise,
    Looking in her comely eyes.
    The two of us would just lay.
    My no longer covet dream today.
    Holding her wholeheartedly.
    Silently enjoying each others company.
    Her head ardently placed on me.
    She knows how fortunate I feel to be
    With her now and in her heart.
    A feeling known from the start.
    So on this hammock I think of
    How our bodies could float above.
    Then take all the problems that we know,
    And just simply let them go.




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 15:07:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It's always great when you can enjoy someones company, especially in a hammock. It makes me want to have a backyard and a hammock. *sighs*
    I dig ur write cause it's calming. Keep it up and enjoy the moments.
    | Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]



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