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    dots Submission Name: Seasonal Lover's Dancedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 481
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    Bytes: 440



    Description:
       A winter/spring melding moment

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share
    tif


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    dotsSeasonal Lover's Dancedots
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    Only two days since the last snow
    Life is a color
    Springing
    Budding
    Forth ~*~

    A backdrop of white
    Sunlight
    nature smiles
    warming the day
    a hue
    Blues only
    waters
    reflecting skies

    The still chilled
    winds
    animate foliage
    Awaking
    Shaking off
    Winter

    Seasonal lover's dance ~*~




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 15:11:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I do love spring, it's new awakening, the first shoots of green breaching the snow.
    To hear the first robins song as she sings the praise of another beautiful spring.
    Beautiful thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the imagery and the metaphor here. Very well done. :^) Although we don't get much snow down here in Dixie, when it does I love to watch the change in color and light when it starts to warm up after a snow. You've captured that very well here.
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by JAvery | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful. how is everything??? great read awesome write. keep posting. i lvoe your work.




    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Dancing from Winter - into Spring.

    How about the cha cha ???

    Very visual
    Very inspiring
    Very good !!!

    C.K.
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't wait to fully shed winter and put on my spring coat. Love this piece tiff. Hope all is well.
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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