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    Author: Anticlownperson
    ASL Info:    16/f/nowhere land
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 248/390/118
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 1108
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1457



    Description:
       I wrote this piece this afternoon. I'm still not really sure what it's about, but I think with time, it's meaning will change, and each person has to figure it out for themself.


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    I'm about to say fuck this
    I don't give a damn anymore
    Hang the rules, it's not like
    I ever followed them anyways

    Rebel in a revolution
    Silent like the grave
    I speak through my words
    So do me a favour
    Shut up and listen

    I'll say what I want
    You can't silence emotion
    I don't always say the truth
    But my lies are always guarantees
    That something is wrong
    And something needs to change

    A saviour among sinners
    Still among the damned
    And I couldn't care less
    Because all the interesting
    People are in Hell
    If Hell even exists for real
    Quit your preaching

    I'm so close to losing it
    This must be what going
    Crazy feels like
    I'm stuck in the madhouse
    Called life, called reality
    They've locked all the doors
    And binned the key
    But I don't care

    I'm about to say fuck this
    I don't give a damn anymore
    Hang the rules, it's not like
    I ever followed them anyways
    Rebel in a revolution
    Silent like the grave
    I speak through my words
    So do me a favour
    Shut up and listen




    Submitted on 2007-03-05 20:54:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "I'll say what I want
    You can't silence emotion"

    I like those lines best of all.

    I like this poem...it almost makes me think of a punk-rock song that is all anti-establishment, I'll-do-as-I-damn-well-please-and-your-biznatchy-ass-can't-stop-me-ish. It's got that vibe. Anyway, I think it is well written, and I enjoyed reading it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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