Description: I wrote this piece this afternoon. I'm still not really sure what it's about, but I think with time, it's meaning will change, and each person has to figure it out for themself.
I'm about to say fuck this
I don't give a damn anymore
Hang the rules, it's not like
I ever followed them anyways
Rebel in a revolution
Silent like the grave
I speak through my words
So do me a favour Shut up and listen
I'll say what I want
You can't silence emotion
I don't always say the truth
But my lies are always guarantees
That something is wrong
And something needs to change
A saviour among sinners
Still among the damned
And I couldn't care less
Because all the interesting
People are in Hell
If Hell even exists for real Quit your preaching
I'm so close to losing it
This must be what going
Crazy feels like
I'm stuck in the madhouse
Called life, called reality
They've locked all the doors
And binned the key
But I don't care
I'm about to say fuck this
I don't give a damn anymore
Hang the rules, it's not like
I ever followed them anyways
Rebel in a revolution
Silent like the grave
I speak through my words
So do me a favour Shut up and listen
I like this poem...it almost makes me think of a punk-rock song that is all anti-establishment, I'll-do-as-I-damn-well-please-and-your-biznatchy-ass-can't-stop-me-ish. It's got that vibe. Anyway, I think it is well written, and I enjoyed reading it.
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