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    dots Submission Name: Canticle 2dots
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    Author: DavidHirt
    ASL Info:    29/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    7.46 - 572/332/102
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 181
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    And even the boats cannot hold back compassion.
    They join in the clamor of going creation.
    They rattle their paeans to Adonai clothed
    In gold, unto Aten arrayed in gold.
    He raises his arms, like an Aleph, in praise,
    To God who brings dawn; the most Ancient of Days,
    And treasures the moments his eyes can full take
    The vision of sun as it climbs from the lake.
    It lifts like an act of divine consecration
    Up over the waters; wine dark. Desolation
    Is gone and he feels, like the land, to be spoused
    And stands like a masthead in morning light doused.





    Submitted on 2007-03-05 21:59:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And thank God for the search engine, and for Wikipedia, both given to provide answers to the often repeated question, "and what does that word mean, I should know...", for those of us less acquainted with worshipful elegance. Actually I enjoy this kind of thing because there's hope I might remember something new once in a while.

    I find this quite worthy of it's title, an item of elegant worship. One item that nags me a little is the introduction of "He", whom I felt from the lead-in as referring to Adonai and Aten, as one and the same, however, then "he" raises his arms in praise "to God", blowing that theory.

    So I beg the question, who is "He"? Of course it is getting late so maybe the gray matter is shutting down already for the night.



    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]



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