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    dots Submission Name: So Scareddots
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    Author: soaring eyes
    ASL Info:    17/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18/30/19
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsSo Scareddots
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    Don't know what to do
    feels like a dark tunnel that I have to go through
    so scared so depressed
    feels like a pain is shocking through my chest
    going to my stomach
    fullness of my breast
    so scared
    that I am carrying another
    I know that this news will really hurt my mother
    but what about me
    I'm scared
    so scared
    so hurt
    so dumb
    one drop; one slip of a little cum
    now I'm lost and it feels like I'm all alone
    only communication that we have is a conversation on the phone.
    stomach soon to get big
    my grave I shall dig.
    so scared
    so hurt
    so through
    only the lord knows what I must
    do






    Submitted on 2007-03-06 08:30:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If this write is about you, I hope that all works out really well for you.

    A difficult subjet to put to words, but you handled it very well.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG! Are u really pregnant? Please tell me u are not. You have your whole life ahead of u. If u ever need anyone to talk to, just reply and I will listen.
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by bigothgurl | [ Reply to This ]


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