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So Scared


Author: soaring eyes
ASL Info:    17/f/ga
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18 /30 /19
Words: 129
Class/Type: Poetry /
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So Scared



Don't know what to do
feels like a dark tunnel that I have to go through
so scared so depressed
feels like a pain is shocking through my chest
going to my stomach
fullness of my breast
so scared
that I am carrying another
I know that this news will really hurt my mother
but what about me
I'm scared
so scared
so hurt
so dumb
one drop; one slip of a little cum
now I'm lost and it feels like I'm all alone
only communication that we have is a conversation on the phone.
stomach soon to get big
my grave I shall dig.
so scared
so hurt
so through
only the lord knows what I must
do






Submitted on 2007-03-06 08:30:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  If this write is about you, I hope that all works out really well for you.

A difficult subjet to put to words, but you handled it very well.

Frank.
| Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  OMG! Are u really pregnant? Please tell me u are not. You have your whole life ahead of u. If u ever need anyone to talk to, just reply and I will listen.
| Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by bigothgurl | [ Reply to This ]


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