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    dots Submission Name: forget me notdots
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    Author: blu_kittin
    ASL Info:    20/F/Garden of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 711/397/207
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1365
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 233



    Description:
       to grammy, i won't forget you


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    dotsforget me notdots
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    forget me not in the haze of old age
    forget me not in your gilded cage
    forget me not in your new life
    forget me not in sucess or strife
    forget me not in peace or war
    forget me not where ever you are




    Submitted on 2007-03-06 08:49:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short, sweet and to the point.

    I opened this because of the title, since forget me nots are my favorite flower...lol

    but I actually like this a lot.

    I'm going to favorite it. :D

    <3
    Rose
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]


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