Swept away
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it's about death, of course, and the after affects of losing someone you love very much. You feel like the water has just taken a hold of you and swept you away.
Swept away
swept away by the oceans tide only in you would my heart confide but now you're a dream that will never come true my sad heart is now badly bruised it took a beating when you left us all I'm on my hands and knees because I can only crawl weakened greatly by the misunderstandings It's hard to believe that I'm still standing questions fill my head death is complicated I want to cry out loud my heart is weighted the water destroys the sand my castle has gone away my home is no longer my home a day is no longer a day minutes are hours and hour are years time passes by as my memory disappears I was swept away by the oceans tide and nothing matters when love is denied |
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| Ouch....those last few words were very piercing to one's soul. When you have love for someone and they don't show it in return, or the crush your feelings its the most difficult feeling in the world. I like the imagery and the feeling that your poem gives as I was reading... Exceptional work Jb | Posted on 2009-02-11 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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