Scared
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I don't know what this is. I had a meaning for it, but I forgot. I wrote this when I was like twelve or thirteen. I guess it just means that a person died because they were too depressed and kept falling back into darkness until it captured them fully, and they left behind a person that loved them very much.
Scared
Icy dreams raging fires numbness covers the compulsive liar put on a new face nobody cares your so distant you left them back there tell your story the one of rain and blood how you escaped the darkness I just knew that you would but ghostly figures push their way through back through the darkness back into you unresponsive you lay broken in half and the daring voices make you laugh the sun rises high the light covers you face blood on you hands and blood on you waist did you forget all that my heart held did you forget all the feeling that I felt this box of ashes I hold in my hand is not any better then a box of sand my love went to waste and now I'm afraid if one more glass shatters I know I will break the sun sets on the ocean you memory dives into the sea swimming away from the future swimming away from me |
Submitted on 2007-03-06 22:02:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Ooo, I really liked this. I am feeling the emotion here, it's very smoothly done with a beautiful and concise rhyming pattern. The ending was neatly done. Thanks for the read GBG - Leah | Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ] | |
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