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Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253 /299 /172
Words: 179
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I don't know what this is. I had a meaning for it, but I forgot. I wrote this when I was like twelve or thirteen. I guess it just means that a person died because they were too depressed and kept falling back into darkness until it captured them fully, and they left behind a person that loved them very much.


Icy dreams
raging fires
numbness covers
the compulsive liar

put on a new face
nobody cares
your so distant
you left them back there

tell your story
the one of rain and blood
how you escaped the darkness
I just knew that you would

but ghostly figures
push their way through
back through the darkness
back into you

you lay broken in half
and the daring voices
make you laugh

the sun rises high
the light covers you face
blood on you hands
and blood on you waist

did you forget
all that my heart held
did you forget
all the feeling that I felt

this box of ashes
I hold in my hand
is not any better
then a box of sand

my love went to waste
and now I'm afraid
if one more glass shatters
I know I will break

the sun sets on the ocean
you memory dives into the sea
swimming away from the future
swimming away from me

Submitted on 2007-03-06 22:02:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ooo, I really liked this. I am feeling the emotion here, it's very smoothly done with a beautiful and concise rhyming pattern. The ending was neatly done.

Thanks for the read

GBG - Leah
| Posted on 2007-03-08 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]

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