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    dots Submission Name: Newsstand Cornerdots
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    Author: Anticlownperson
    ASL Info:    16/f/nowhere land
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 248/390/118
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1034
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 991



    Description:
       I actually wrote this back and the end of the summer, but I hadn't done anything with it until now. For some reason, now just seemed like a good time to post it, perhaps because it seems to have greater personal meaning for me right now.


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    dotsNewsstand Cornerdots
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    Standing on te corner waiting
    For a half-friend, not a real one
    Dime-a-dozen, easy to get
    Easy to lose, replaceable
    Buy them in blue glass jars
    Two-pence pieces at the corner store

    Standing on the corner waiting
    Glance down an alley
    There's an angel there
    With her skirt around her wiast
    And a devil between her legs
    And she's the more experienced

    Standing on the corner waiting
    Listen to an old man telling me
    A year can be a lifetime
    And a lifetime can be a year
    If that's how long it's been
    Since you started over

    Standing on the corner waiting
    Watching the angst-ridden fakes
    Watching them complain about pain
    Pain hasn't been an issue
    Because this has been my rebirth
    And birth is supposed to hurt

    Standing on the corner waiting
    for life




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