Description: Sort of written in the 3rd person from the point of view of my birth parents had they aborted me instead of placing me in an orphanage for adoption. I guess this is how I hope they would feel... But I'll never know. This song will be on the yet untitled album I am recording this year.
Wow.... very deep.. says so much.. and although it is over, although I have read the end of this song.. I want to keep reading more.. its heart-felt... and I feel its prob so deep is because its something you have went through.. I feel thats what we all write best about is things we've been or are going through..
First of all welcome to eliteskills
I hope in time you will grow to like this place and meet new people.
there is a lot of good people who are at this site
Now onto your song,
since your commentary type requested is unspecified i will speak how this song made me feel,
To tell you the honest truth it made me cry.
Then it made me wish you were my kid. And ask you to forgive me for giving you up and if you were able to forgive me would you think about coming home.
It's a sad yet heartfelt deep meaning song take care thankyou for the read of this piece