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    dots Submission Name: The Journaldots
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    Author: Wired
    Elite Ratio:    7.76 - 21/11/16
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       Another song from the new album.


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    Seventh Edge - The Journal


    Memories they fade just like
    the ink on the pages of my life.
    The time has passed for new entries
    in this journal that I write.

    'cause it's over now.
    I think I'm finally ready to just let go.
    There's a part I have been hiding.
    Part of me I couldn't show...

    If I hadn't been myself -
    If I had been born somebody else.
    Could I get it right this time?

    Or, is it safe to say that I
    wouldn't make it if I tried?
    Would I just be left behind?

    You would surely still be blind...

    I am captured in a photograph,
    a moment I knew couldn't last.
    A time when I was something else,
    I wish I could go back...

    But I'm older now.
    Didn't think it then, but now I know.
    There's a constant cloud above me
    and a pool to drown below.

    Nothing can change this life.
    Still, I can not rest.

    Heretics break this strife.
    Silence the blessed.

    Seperation is empty.




    Submitted on 2007-03-06 23:45:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, now after getting to know you and reading this. Its sad, to know you were treated the way you were with those who never appericated this lovely personality of yours i have grown to love and adore. I simply hope that if you do not know by now that within time you can come to understand i love you with all my heart and you'll always have a place in mine. And I hope I do all I can to show you that I do appericate all the things the morjority of us seem to take for granted and I do love it when you open the door for me tell me I'm beautifull...or when you take my hand and hold and kiss it... i adore you i really DOOOO

    ~!*Jackie*!~
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      
    This song didn't have a comment on it so I picked this one,

    I believe life can change for the better.
    but thats just me and what i have gone through to get to this point in my life.

    It took many years of healing myself and forgiving not only people who caused me pain, but for me to forgive myself for those I hurt in my life.
    I see you said this is on the new album is it out in the stores?
    If it is I can get my daughter to order it for me.

    I am very interested in hearing the whole ablum.

    Take care Dave I hope as time goes by life gets better for you.
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by deluka | [ Reply to This ]


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