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    dots Submission Name: Thresholddots
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    Author: Wired
    Elite Ratio:    7.76 - 21/11/16
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Description:
       Another song from the new album.


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    dotsThresholddots
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    Gave away part of me.
    I have since been incomplete.
    Not that I am overcome,
    it's just my world has come undone.

    All the memories I own...
    It seems I'm better off alone.
    The vacant look behind your stare.
    The smell of anger in the air.

    As I drug myself to sleep.
    Into subconscious thoughts you creep.
    The very reason reason I'm still here
    is why I need to disappear.

    Under heels is where I stay.
    To nonexistent God I pray.
    Through these vivid dreams I shake.
    ...Threshold of what I can take.




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