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    dots Submission Name: Goodbyedots
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    Author: Wired
    Elite Ratio:    7.76 - 21/11/16
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Description:
       Lryics from a song that stayed on the indie and college playlists for months. This is our most recognized song. It is from the album "Book of Sorrow" 2004.


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    dotsGoodbyedots
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    Too many times I've though this through.

    Seen it all before, and it's nothing new.

    Can't remember what it felt like touching you.

    Can't believe how far apart we grew.



    And I've never felt so alone

    in all my life.

    Can't tell the difference between

    day and night.



    Don't say Goodbye.

    Just say that you'll remember me when it's over tonight.



    Wish I knew where I was going, before I leave.

    Wish I knew the punishment that I would receive.

    Wish I could say that I still believe.

    But I couldn't get a hand in my time of need.



    And I've never been so alone

    in all my life.

    Can't tell the difference between

    dark and light.



    Don't say Goodbye.

    Just say that you'll remember me when it's over tonight.



    Tried to be generous, but no one cared.

    It's hard to find happiness, and I get so scared.

    Things get more difficult, and I'm not prepared.

    Someone could've helped me, but no one dared.



    And I've never been so out of control

    in all my life.

    Can't tell the difference between

    wrong and right.



    Don't say Goodbye.

    Just say that you'll remember me when it's over tonight.

    And I swear that I tried,

    But I couldn't stop from drowning and it's over tonight.



    Yeah I swear that I tried,

    But I couldn't stop from drowning and it's over tonight.

    So don't say Goodbye.

    Just say that you'll remember me cause it's over tonight.

    Tonight.




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      mmm i like this speaks a lot of emotion.... as well as pain. possbily something you've went through with a past relationship.. or a member of the band...

    ~*jackie*~

    Thanks for posting
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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