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    dots Submission Name: A Feeling Deaddots
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    Author: producedskum
    ASL Info:    17/M/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/0/5
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsA Feeling Deaddots
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    you told me three days straight
    you liked me like no one else
    but when my eyes read, my heart crushed from the weight
    of these emotional bruises and welts

    why couldnt you have told the truth
    about you not getting along with liars
    for all you hid was useless proof
    and started brand new fires

    youre not any different
    but youre not at all the same
    when i read that point 8 print
    i realized your little game

    to toy with anothers feeling
    is not the right thing to do
    for how would you like the killing
    of all the love inside of you

    for love is most precious of all
    it only comes once in a while
    all you had to do is stall
    and you could have had my love on speed dial

    but now as i regain my thoughts
    and recollect of the past
    i think of all the empty lots
    and broken items that require casts

    so as i break your heart
    as you did to mine
    ill pull it slowly apart
    unlike your disassembly line

    my feelings long gone
    all thanks to your lie
    me and you, is done
    so i say to you goodbye.




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