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    dots Submission Name: Mirrordots
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    Author: Wired
    Elite Ratio:    7.76 - 21/11/16
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    Description:
       A bit of a schizophrenic tale that was a popular song from the 'Book of Sorrow' album. Also, the "mirror" refers to a cocaine mirror, not the bathroom variety. Hope this helps with interpretation. The song was written about a friend who gave up the substance after a long hard battle.


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    dotsMirrordots
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    I've got questions that can't be answered,

    and you refuse to say.

    I can't help but wonder what you're thinking

    as I drive away.



    And the mirror brings you nearer, but never clearer.

    Cold as stone, stand alone this time.



    Could have pushed a little harder.

    Shouldn't try to be a martyr.

    And everyone saw it come but me.

    I wish I was a little stronger.

    But I can't stay here any longer.

    I see... In the mirror.



    Conversation lacking substance,

    With no one to reply.

    Divide attention between the who, what,

    When, where, and why.



    In the mirror, does it appear we're something dearer?

    No, it's you I hate, contemplate this crime.



    Lights go out with no conclusions.

    And no one wonders why.

    You say it's life I... I see illusion.

    Someone says goodbye.



    In the mirror I see fear or is it much more?

    Numb inside. Terrified I cry...



    You couldn't push me any harder.

    Cause I was meant to be a martyr.

    And everyone saw it come but you.

    Now you'll have to be stronger.

    Cause I can't help you any longer.

    I'm through with the mirror.

    In the mirror.




    Submitted on 2007-03-07 02:08:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your description made it seem like it wasn't yours...was it?
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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